in my letter the audience i aimed my letter towards was ciggarettes companies and there advertising. the reason i aimed my letter towards these people were because i saw a pregnant woman smoking a ciggarette in a parking lot and it really upset me. i also wanted to aim my letter towards pregnant women and/or moms because i know this would make a big impact on them and they would feel the same way as i did.
the way i organized my paragraphs was by using my first rough copy that we wrote in class and i took my main ideas from those paragraphs and put them all together. i made sure my first and last sentances were very strong. i wanted to pull the reader in and i also wanted to allow them to leave with a strong view on my point. i made sure to have a valid arugument in each paragraph.
the area that i felt needed more work was my transition words for each paragraph. i wanted it to sound very professional so i tried my best. i felt as though therefore and however were boring transition words and i feel like i need more ideas on how to flow my paragraphs. i remember in high school i had a list of htem that helped make my writing stronger, i should probably make a new list.
that is a very strong topic and i feel the same way. people are not aware of what they are doing to themselves. writing from a rough copy always works good you always pick up on your mistakes and add more information the second time around. transitioning is a hard thing to do it takes a lot of practice to get it right. my advice would be to find a book on whatever your writing about or an article and see what they did to transition between paragraphs since their a professional. this has always helped me when i have writers block.
ReplyDeleteMy biggest question is where or who do you plan on sending this letter to? I like your audience because I can see the clear connection to your purpose or overall complaint but who could you send this letter to?
ReplyDeletei sent this letter to the lady who is in charge of a cigarette awareness program
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