Wednesday, February 16, 2011

My Progress: Project 1

Currently I have finished my cover letter. I believe its near complete, with minimal to no corrections needed. I would like to enhance it with some better words and perhaps have someone check over my sentences to make sure that they’re clear and concise. I want to get my point across quickly and easily, so the reader knows I’m not trying to waste his/her time.

I actually feel that my cover letter could use some more information on it, but because of my lack of experience in the IT field I really can’t elaborate on any accomplishments. Although I may have a few semesters of college I don’t think that’s enough to really form a good impression. Although my GPA might be better than most, I feel that maybe they will want a person with more semesters of college.

1 comment:

  1. Anthony,

    I wonder what you mean by "better words"? You talk about being clear and concise but I'm not sure what words are better than others in this context. Think about your reader and the potential sit down interview. Make sure you paint a picture of who you are so that translates during a face to face interview.

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