1. My audience for this letter was people who are driving. Millions of car accidents happen because people are texting and talking on the phone and not paying attention to driving.
2. I organized my paragraph by looking in the text books at the different examples .I thought about what I wanted to say in my letter .Then I fallowed the format in the textbook to break up my thoughts and put it into paragraph form.
3. Some of the things I need to work on were developing my complaint I don’t think I did a good job of going into detail and explaining myself.
I totally understand what you mean about people texting while driving but I have a question about who you are addressing the letter too. The textbook was a great help and I found it very helpful also. I look forward to reading your letter.
ReplyDeleteAllison, I think you do a good job explaining who your audience is but I'm curious about who you are sending your letter to. Is that clearer in your letter?
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