1. Explain who your audience is and how you approached them in your letter. In other words, what did you literally say or think that helped you write for this audience.
My audience is one person but can be read out to a group. I provided enough details to explain what the situation was and what could be done to resolve this problem.2. How did you go about organizing your paragraphs?
I began with an introduction of what my job is and what exactly is done and used to provide the reader with enough information to understand what I am complaining about.
3. What were some areas of your letter you felt needed more attention, needed to be reworked or developed?
I believe possibly the introduction but if anything the whole layout of the paper. The areas I seperated each paragraph and what certain details should have been in the introduction, body and conclusion.
You did a good job with providing enough details, and stating that you have the background and knowledge that makes your complaint valid. Paragraph organization is easily fixable.
ReplyDeleteI agree you do a good job being specific here. Does your letter reflect this?
ReplyDeleteI believe that it does reflect this and after being revised, to the best of my ability to completely reflect this.
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